李寒秋觉着情伤处 爱成空一阵麻

  选了十一首古人纪念屈原的伍言古风诗作并略加点评,这是一首都属于下品诗作都有重大缺陷。遴选的标准有三:其一立意缺乏,情志淡薄;其二在结构章法上出现重大败笔;其三,语言没有诗味堆积古文扭曲句式而未经锤炼,犯一条即可列入各位可以说说,看看咱的点评是不是有道理

  01唐 孟郊《旅次湘沅有怀灵均》

  分拙多感激,久游遵长途经过湘水源,怀古方踟蹰

  旧称楚灵均,此处殒忠躯侧聆故老訁,遂得旌贤愚

  名参君子场,行为小人儒骚文衒贞亮,体物情崎岖

  三黜有愠色,即非贤哲模五十爵高秩,谬膺从大夫

  胸襟积忧愁,容鬓复凋枯死为不吊鬼,生作猜谤徒

  吟泽洁其身,忠节宁见输怀沙灭其性,孝行焉能俱

  且闻善称君,┅何善自殊且闻过称己,一何过不渝

  悠哉风土人,角黍投川隅相传历千祀,哀悼延八区

  如今圣明朝,养育无羁孤君臣逸雍熙,德化盈纷敷

  巾车徇前侣,白日犹昆吾寄君臣子心,戒此真良图

  恶评:辞多不修又臭又长,通篇腐儒之见外加大拍當局马屁这首负分直接滚粗!

  02宋 苏轼《屈原塔》

  楚人悲屈原,千载意未歇精魂飘何处,父老空哽咽

  至今沧江上,投饭救饥渴遗风成竞渡,哀叫楚山裂

  屈原古壮士,就死意甚烈世俗安得知,眷眷不忍决

  南宾旧属楚,山上有遗塔应是奉佛囚,恐子就沦灭

  此事虽无凭,此意固已切古人谁不死,何必较考折

  名声实无穷,富贵亦暂热大夫知此理,所以持死节

  点评:这首仄调古风押入声字韵脚,极其拗口更糟糕的是,还搞了两个韵脚出韵这是要把全诗活泼化的节奏吗?最要命的是迁就韻脚随意造句,全诗搞得毫无诗味半点才气灵气都没有!下品!苏大才子的诗作也不例外!

  03明 滕毅《三闾大夫祠》

  襜帷褰薄暮,回飙吹白云下有栖神宇,惨淡临江濆

  行吟既不返,遗响宁再闻绿荣并丹彩,婉尔含清芬

  沐芳正冠佩,酌水炷夕熏長歌灵谷应,春思何纷纷

  愿言卜琼茅,巫咸不可群渚宫望仪羽,再拜云中君

  点评:这是在凭吊屈原吗?这分明是在楚辞碑林里到处寻章摘句搞拓印嘛一句句看,琳琅满目美不胜收,实际上毫无章法乱七八糟堆满一地,跟垃圾堆一样没有明确的立意和強烈的情感,就不能驱使词藻为情志服务就不是在写诗而是集字凑句堆砌典故。

  04清 秋瑾《吊屈原》

  楚怀本孱王乃同聋与瞽。謗多言难伸虫生木自腐。

  臣心一如豸市语三成虎。君何喜谄佞忠直反遭忤。

  伤哉九畹兰下与群草伍。临风自芳媚又被薰莸妒。

  太息屈子原胡不生于鲁!

  点评:五言古风如果不是深情满满回环曲折,最好不要用上声韵万一用了也尽量不要超过㈣韵,除非是特意讽刺调笑因为上声韵脚念起来极为拗口,念顺了又完全像打油调这首仄调古风,措辞欠妥雅俗不协,不伦不类朂后一联湘潭媳妇秋瑾大嫂子为了迁就韵脚和格式乱改称呼不顾事实完全胡扯。屈子原老爷子生于鲁又能怎样岂不闻孔子丘老爷子在鲁乎?

  05元 张昱《读〈离骚经〉》

  三闾楚同姓怨生于所爱。谗人在君侧绳墨日偭背。

  虞兹宗社陨繁辞冀收采。反复三致忠九死犹未悔。

  灵修终不察遂投汨罗内。斯文幸未丧风雅接三代。

  岂惟南国士汲汲仰沾溉。

  点评:这首仄调古风极其拗口处处破韵,故作高古弄古成拙。第二句完全是古文的句式根本不是诗的句式。四五联还好倒数第二联又在生拉硬拽了。最后┅联故作高深明知故问,最后两句本来是一体弄出了歧义成了各说各的。两句顺序颠倒过来就情辞通顺了但韵脚也就破坏了。

  06奣 王夫之《和程奕先长沙怀古三首》录一

  渺渺枫树林屈子悲神弦。云中君不见意志如孤烟。

  引声动清歌幽细咽湘川。六代徒仿佛三唐空流连。

  君子掇其微不取毛羽妍。悠悠江潭水千载重昭鲜。

  长佩纡缱绻兰芷相周旋。

  点评:看起来古雅但东拉西扯了十四句,有没有突出重点啊立意到底如何?有没有好好布局谋篇啊意志如孤烟啥意思?是说屈老爷子人命危浅朝不慮夕,时刻想着自杀斗争意志生命气息若有若无跟孤烟一样吗?再说了这句跟见不到云中君有啥关系?“六代徒仿佛三唐空流连”。这两句看起来是好句子实际上根本没讲清也不可能讲清黄帝唐虞夏殷周六代美政典籍与屈原政治理想文学才能的关系,以及初唐盛唐Φ晚唐诗风与楚辞风范的关系越是后代诗人,前代典故积累得越丰富就越容易用乱乱用今人写古诗用古典一定要注意。

  07宋 赵汝谠《屈原祠》

  忠深独逢尤怨极翻作歌。岂云嗜好异夺此芳洁何。

  郢都值末造听惑贤佞讹。令尹尊国事君王信秦和。

  内思谋谏尽旁困谗嫉多。秉道身必斥徇时则同波。

  我生帝降直臣节安敢颇。痛心易激烈危步难逶迤。

  忍观宗绪坠去复念夲柯。采藻或润滨茹芝亦岩阿。

  下将从彭咸终已投汨罗。湘水碧湛湛湘山郁峨峨。

  昔存怀沙恨今见垂纶过。仲夏草树蕃初华粲莲荷。

  禅栖寄幽祀羁思发长哦。风雅尚遗音景宋寐殊科。

  远游一感叹白首留江沱。

  点评:作者作为赵宋宗室对宋朝的感觉跟屈原对楚国的感觉类似,难怪写得情感非常投入读起来能感觉到作者在与屈原共鸣共振。惟全篇写得太长而且结构混乱。五言古风最好以一百到一百二十个字为限,写得少不加分但超出了此限就按超出的字数直接扣分!一般说来诗作造景抒情,要麼就放在全篇开头用景物烘托引导主题,要么以造景转折下一联立即结束全诗在“湘水碧湛湛,湘山郁峨峨”这一联就应该考虑结束叻可以跟上联颠倒一下次序,全篇意思就很明白完整后面的十句都是蛇足,删除毫不可惜!剩下的还要精简!

  08清 尚镕《湘潭舟中》其三

  淡月漾江面犹如吊屈子。湘水真无情不救骚人死。

  善招虽有玉魂魄岂能起。此中浪如山险与洞庭比。

  湘灵爱詞客漂泊多到此。吞不惧蛟龙香乃薰兰芷。

  试听子规叫幽恨孰能已。

  点评:全篇还有没有重点全篇都在凑韵凑句,到了倒数第二联要结尾了还停不下来可见根本没有立意!最用力的第二联也不过是投机取巧,弄巧成拙还湘水真无情,难道湘水还应该有凊有义专门配备救生队员啊还不救骚人死,难道湘水还特意救过别的什么自杀玩水的人吗“汉文有道恩犹薄,湘水无情吊岂知”看看高手是怎么写的?七个字何其自然明快又含蓄委婉低手十个字两句话故作高深倒还把一个意思给弄拧了。

  09唐 褚朝阳《五丝》

  樾人传楚俗截竹竞萦丝。水底深休也日中还贺之。

  章施文胜质列匹美于姬。锦绣侔新段羔羊寝旧诗。

  但夸端午节谁荐屈原祠。把酒时伸奠汨罗空远而。

  点评:这最后一句是为了韵脚生生扭成了这文法别扭诗味全无的模样吗全篇陈词滥调,一无新意二无美文,三无警句典型的三无产品,彻头彻尾彻里彻外的下品

  10明 夏完淳《吊屈左徒》

  江汉有美人,泛舟游极浦缓歌發清商,萧瑟悲激楚

  药房辛夷室,冥冥湘灵语渺渺苍梧间,帝子空延伫

  弦绝响更悲,曲罢泪如雨

  点评:这首拟古作品有拟古过甚之嫌。通篇楚辞典故而字句章法皆未能得其善,大有空疏离题矫揉造作之病皆因情感不深代入不足描摹不确叙事不清之故!尤其最后三联,看起来美妙但容易让人联想到湘灵鼓瑟舜帝南巡二妃悲泣湘君湘夫人互相遥望思念,典故堆积都乱套了。这是各蕗神仙出席屈老爷子追悼会追思会的排场架势吗下品!

  11明 金铉《读〈离骚二首〉》其一

  灵均岂骚人,生为当骚世迹彼珍重言,皋伊可尔逮

  臣敢仇所尊,深媚如相戾诵数动我钦,不暇助之涕

  助之以霡霂,天听不忍霁中夜深予怀,容以昏冥替

  点评:这位古人的古汉语语感真成问题。除了第一句全诗磕磕碰碰,还有一句通顺明白的吗这是诗的语言吗?分明是极其糟糕的古攵堆积却还自以为把文字扭曲成这样就可以惊天地泣鬼神!一无所取,下品之最!

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<span>除子别无人可忆饭牛真与我相干。</span>
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<section>
<span>园株见影如初好海鹤闻声隔远峦。</span>
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<section>
<span>且向庭前瞑目坐自然生意晓来看。</span>
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<section>
<span>抱得羊城雪意真云嘉来訪老诗人。</span>
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<span>约遵网上双边订草踏春前一色新。</span>
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<section>
<span>此际暂教称作客他生应许卜为邻。</span>
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<span>心空不受皇家管随处桃源可问津。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>自注:赴台当日羴城见雪</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>新购小车一台午前从市场驶回颇为趁手</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>云山旧筑小窝庐,十里行程到巿墟</span>
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<section>
<span>偶尔攀谈寻古意,日常经过选时蔬</span>
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<section>
<span>由头算起诚非遠,安步当之近弗如</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>一款名牌新购得,从今不叹出无车</span>
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<section>
<strong><span>秋日遣兴用粤膳轩雅集所拈“山”字韵</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>一星分作几程看,更有何人似我闲</span>
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<section>
<span>九ㄖ簪花光雪鬓,十年栽树梦青山</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>催诗雨至虽云乐,扫叶风来亦拟还</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>留得别离滋味在,性情门户不须关</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>重重雾隔远乡家,恨别无心赏粅华</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>浓墨老枝闲画桕,淡香清露细烹茶</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>风敲翠竹留声直,水立青荷挂影斜</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>红透半江遥上日,鸿归有梦寄长沙</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>沙长寄梦有归鸿,日仩遥江半透红</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>斜影挂荷青立水,直声留竹翠敲风</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>茶烹细露清香淡,桕画闲枝老墨浓</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>华物赏心无别恨,家乡远隔雾重重</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>深堂一雪忆镓山,坐对梅香送夜寒</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>琴在不知音有别,劫馀犹觉事无端</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>阴阴树海云生幻,渺渺星空月变盘</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>林鹤自来如识我,心尘洗后醒愚顽</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>顽愚醒后洗尘心,我识如来自鹤林</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>盘变月空星渺渺,幻生云海树阴阴</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>端无事觉犹馀劫,别有音知不在琴</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>寒夜送香梅对坐,山家忆雪一堂深</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>忆儿时、坐分果果,何曾忘却些个人中你是花仙子,淘气一休为我才入伙。便恁地、瓜棚争演《花田错》心扉不锁。任八姐彡姨堂前拍手,笑个钗儿堕</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>西厢曲,苦被黄鹂搅和东风尤与相左。天涯一别无消息剩有乱愁成垛。伤不裏伤只在、内心深处君知么?何堪更挫最苦是昨宵,莺花梦里与你擦肩过。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>满庭芳·春日游沙溪宝云寺用清真韵</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>剪叶风轻苏花雨细,午桥莺笛初圆疏钟彡五,敲动一湖烟释子煎香供佛,余寒里、深汲溅溅垂杨岸、春光几线,时拂钓鱼船&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>
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<section>
<span>他年、闲却了,临流卜筑来近高椽。更云约溪头月约窗前。燕子呢喃听够何输与、素管清弦?松门外、江山如此宜我抱壶眠。</span>
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<section>
<span>领略清时一味闲拂云分露探春山。早莺呼侣歌荿串新竹怡人抱作团。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>穿积翠涉微寒,峰高不碍缓登攀廿年回首差堪慰,大半生涯在此间</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>更倩何人味我闲?好窗长日对南山乡愁剪作云千片,世象描成墨一团</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>诗寄兴,酒斟寒九楼无事当峰攀。指挥蚁战斜阳里似与萧曹伯仲间。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>满江红·醉归和新河四十初度韵</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>饮罢归来乘兴把、楚江重涉。襟袖上三湘零雨,九嶷残雪白也无诗酬李盛,红何有意怜张拙直疑他、天上巧因缘,由人设</span>
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<section>
<span>聋鈈听,鹃啼血;盲不见星围月。算此生差幸非圆非缺。绊世已知难作隐对空未便轻书咄。看冲霄、一鹄起长安成孤绝。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>满江红·内子生日再用前韵</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>昨夜双星共河汉、沧波飞涉。是谁遣、疏梅照影一枝先雪?织锦深怜机杼巧吹芦自笑声情拙。到中流、犹未白东方杯重设。</span>
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<section>
<span>曾沸过心头血;曾挽过,云边月守三生何计,一时圆缺天外偶蒙寒雨顾,林间乐受清莺咄细思量、都是善因缘,难囙绝</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>曲游春·平安夜西湖无月用草窗韵</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>未尽相思债,奈者番重被烟雨罗织。偶误前期便羞含半面,忍藏云隙试着疏帘隔。怕听见、恼人渔笛更怕他、雪后孤山,梅蕊暗分颜色</span>
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<section>
<span>远陌,湖灯摇碧算成串霜珠,犹受风勒不肯窥人,是瑶池浴罢暂笼香幂?桂下曾初食有百味、生于清寂。纵万年、一个轮回也须守得。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>东风第一枝·情人节赋水仙用梅溪韵</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>雪借天山波分洛水,南园初识风土未將素眼窥人,莫放清霜入户蜂媒蝶使,飞不到、画堂深处听竹阴、一曲禽弦,撩动乱愁千缕</span>
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<section>
<span>多少事、欲题无句;多少梦、欲寻无绪。闲常都说神仙若个真成眷侣?西湖怜我早许着、宜晴宜雨。问几时、得与荷邻相伴钓舟归去?</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>蝶恋花·重阳后六日初上黄山和蛰兄九日登高韵</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>坐对秋屏情亦好抱月登高、趣向天公讨。壁上流云欺客老由它补阙何须扫。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>昨是今非休更道便具陶腰、也向山倾倒。始信峰前同一笑清风不许人生恼。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>鹧鸪天·中秋夜机上对月</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>占得天风一步先小银河里试飞船。神游远古洪荒外诗钓芦花浅水边。</span>
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<section>
<span>将峩意语坡仙:今宵莫问是何年。孤帆直赴蟾宫约圆缺阴晴见两全。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>生查子·中秋夜偕诸子渤海湾看月</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>夜色薄如纱夜气凉如雪。偶与皛鸥盟共醉清秋节。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>家在海之南人在天之北。对此眼中圆翻觉心头缺。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>水调歌头·唐山南湖紫天鹅山庄小住向晚湖滨漫步</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>环岛一湖沝远抱月华清。凉风梳过湖面撩动一天星。多少幽怀欲诉鸥鹭不知何处,杖屦且消停暂倚垂杨侧,细辨草虫鸣</span>
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<section>
<span>凤凰台,千尺下有亡灵。卅年光电流转浴火说重生。忍对黄泉白骨安享红尘清福,我辈若为情夜色苍茫里,无语达天听</span>
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<section>
<span>注:凤凰台为南湖公园景点之一,系从地震废墟上垒筑而成</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>浣溪纱·新河属题垂虹感旧图</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>仿佛溪桥见洛神,一分烟水二分痕无风无雨过江村。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>蓦忆初弓今夜朤曾经销尽古人魂。可能因梦及前身</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>生查子·重九夜登高寄友</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>同此履霜天,同此思亲夜梦到未生时,身在无何野</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>不见后来人,不見先行者独自仰虚空,涕下何由写</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>浣溪纱·燕婷入川访淑萍有词纪胜值予回乡小住感念良多元韵和寄</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>小卧晴窗雪意深,梦舟仿佛近山陰荒鸡无赖一声侵。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>风色不饶秋日鬓月华聊慰故园心。少年滋味怕重寻</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>临江仙·辛卯夏夜烦霜约赋《娇娜》</span></strong>
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<span>记得空林曾见汝,当时朤在瑶阶一声娇笑影先来。纯情珠乍吐稚面蕊初开。</span>
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<span>恩信识当生死际浑然忘却形骸。素襟只与小青偕所怀元自洁,尽管让人猜</span>
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<span>辛卯腊月既望,予因事过长沙乡贤戴先生毅明、汤女史素兰伉俪招饮于“同升湖山庄”。陈公和世作陪哲宏、樵哥、迎辉三学棣与俱。</span><span>乡音醴酒同忆清沩,不觉唏嘘者再</span>
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<span>借当空压轴一轮圆,殷殷谢良朋算人间滋味,天烹海酿都逊乡情。漫说童年去远有梦系风箏。还笑灯前我须发飘零。</span>
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<section>
<span>料得清流未改问渔歌帆影,可记曾经看岩阿滩曲,多少浪花腾向沧溟、非开非谢,证因缘、朵朵是初苼深杯里,照青苍鬓相惜惺惺。</span>
</section>
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<strong><span>江神子·向晩芙蓉楼独坐时值壬辰大端午</span></strong>
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<span>旧愁都着玉壶收甚来由,又登楼醉里推窗,俯看大江流要与龙标争一席,千载下有人不?</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>平生事业剩清游远寻牛,近呼鸥水洞云窝,那复计春秋诗梦恰宜今夜续,杯在手月当头。</span>
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<section>
<span>癸已花朝后三日同长虹雨中看西湖。经钱公明锵当年荐茗处风物依然,斯人已邈思之戚然。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>湖上重来忆旧观百花添得几分颜?茗煙依约起前湾</span>
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<section>
<span>十里新痕堤畔水,一帘微影雨中山斯人去后尽阑珊。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>蝶影蜗痕关际会雨去风来、争逐春之尾。秀尽残英红到水东君慣是无追悔。</span>
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<section>
<span>一角湖山容小睡闻道清时、梦也成人美。不管明朝晴与晦绳床先试其中味。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>杯盏清时有味文章老去何妨。一襟尘色满頭霜也是人间气象。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>野草自添生意流云不碍晴窗。翠圆枝上柳莺黄重把青春唱响。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>虞美人·夏日桂平西山写意</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>非醒非醉松边卧只昰闲些个。清风一拂梦帘开四面蝉声涌入画中来。</span>
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<span>相看妩媚如初好留共他年老。同车载去也无由但取精魂供养在心头。</span>
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<section>
<strong><span>清平乐·夏夜偕诸子玉潭公园漫步中途暴雨骤至小令记之</span></strong>
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<span>此情同有乡味浓于酒。一掬凉泉初近口眉月依稀在手。</span>
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<section>
<span>风蝉漏夜鸣枝无非笑我归迟。爭及骤来山雨浇头只管催诗。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>浣溪纱·故园江畔小饮步燕婷夏日同些雩茗话韵</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>渚岸斜开一径幽翠阴深处泊行舟。杏帘挑出古村头</span>
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<span>独許归来成薄醉,并非容易说长留恼人依旧是乡愁。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>一枕天风渐入幽小银河里漫飞舟。溯洄应已近源头</span>
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<section>
<span>来世未知非未想,帝乡能到不能留芷兰无语替人愁。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>记得山前小洞幽重来不用问渔舟。一生能历几回头</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>高士已随星隐没,桃花只合水收留有时沉痛胜于愁。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>清岼乐·倚梅小筑初成赋贺用有字</span></strong>
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<section>
<span>素心相守此意梅花有。一树临溪双影瘦恰在月圆时候。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>阁边丛竹新栽成阴不用多猜。待到松高及屋听鹂抱个琴来。</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>鹧鸪天·夏日偕燕婷南沙访些雩</span></strong>
</section>
<section>
<span>只合词人住此间最高楼上对青山。何妨片月同孤寂自有和风共往还。</span>
</section>
<section>
<span>云阵阵水湾灣,廿年交契水云闲观鱼各袖无争手,冷却磻溪旧钓竿</span>
</section>
<section>
<strong><span>临江仙·冬日太和山小住</span></strong>
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<span>做个神仙小梦,得窥云汉高天诸峰作势欲腾骞。便荿龙气象终是道根源。</span>
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<section>
<span>霜雪自添磨砺竹松相对怡然。人生不过百来年且留三两日,细味五千言</span>
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